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Thursday, 27 September 2018

The man that changed everything



I was walking on the street. Suddenly the road went up on a 90 degree angle.
Buildings started collapsing they were falling people scream   I tried to run up
the 90 degrees to help I fell and hit my head that's how I blacked out. when I
woke 1 minute later a huge chunk of building was coming my way. I ran as fast
a I could and then I checked my phone. My sarget had been calling and need
my help so I ran to my car and went to the station I went in his office where he
was. He asked me to solve who made the 90 degree turn on the road. As I was
walk on the road I saw a man through a window so I burst through his door ran
up stairs he must have done it he jumped out the window and was running
away and just as I saw that I saw this blue static. I spent hours searching the
house there was something a blue lightning bolt it had a hole and in the was a
pill it was cyan and white so I took it with me and didn't tell sarge so I took and
something came through the 90 degrees a huge evil swamp monster so I got
out of the car with the lighting bolt started to rise up I was flying and I thundered
the monster and I figured out the 90 degrees is a portal to realm that only these
monsters can come through so I defeated the monster with my new powers
and I saw the man my heart was pounding and I thunderstriked him and took
him to the station

1 comment:

  1. Hi Lachlan, what a great story. I really liked the part when the lightning bolt came in. Is this story finished or are you going to write more. Can't wait to hear from you!

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