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Thursday, 1 November 2018

The day I died

The day I died


 So today I went out to the open sea there was this gross weird stuff I saw urtle the turtle eating it so I tried some I was the grossest thing I have ever tried the I saw this tube thingy go up urtles nose so I went to urtle he was cry saying it hurt I used my tail to pull it out it didn't work then I started to get pains then I felt so dizzy I was tumbling around like crazy then my razor sharp tail went straight through urtles fin I couldn’t pull out urtle was silent then i was gone just like urtle.
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous22 November 2018 at 09:37

    Hi Lachlan,

    Nice post,, I love how you named the turtle Urtle (SO CUTE) Anyway maybe next time you could add some fullstops? Or is it just one sentance, other than that great story and I hope to read more!

    God bless,
    Lauren

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