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Monday, 26 June 2017

Winter

WALT: Write a poem about winter using strong verbs.
Winter
Winter is the time of year when changes start to happen.
It’s frosty, snow appears,  you snuggle in bed until you're warm.
Tuck the covers over your head, sip on a nice hot chocolate in bed .
When you go outside you slip and turn.  
Create and throw frozen snowballs, and  make snow angels.
When it's lunchtime, drink a hot cup of soup in front of the fire.
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous20 October 2017 at 12:17

    HI Lachlan
    I liked you poem when you said sip on a nice hot chocolate I wanted to have some hot chocolate but other then that I liked you poem good work Laclan keep up the good work.

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