Where is the best place to drop in fortnite

In our class we had been learning about pervasive writing and I choose to do a
piece on where is the best place to drop in fortnite I enjoyed this because it helped
me get better at writing and have a good time writing about a game I like so here is
my writing.

There are a lot of places to drop in fortnite Haunted Hills is one of them and I
wanted to tell you about Haunted Hills and why it is the best spot to land  because
there are multiple perks with landing Haunted Hills so let me tell you about them. 

1)There is high ground above Haunted Hills at the spooky castle and the one big
building that on top can spawn a chest to shoot down on enemies.  

2)The location is great because it is at the edge of the map so barley anyone goes
there and all the buildings can be great to get a lot of brick and with all the trees
for a lot of wood and it is right next to Junk Junction for lots of metal and close to
two other places like pleasant park and snobby shores being a fair bit away. 

3)In Haunted Hills there is potential for a lot of loot to spawn so you can be kitted
out with the best stuff to take on your enemies later on in the game.

4)In Haunted Hills it is really open and there is lots of space so if someone else
is there you could see them and get good angles to shoot them and be the only one there.

This is the reason I think Haunted Hills is the best spot to land because there is high ground against enemies it is on the edge of the map so there is less players and there is lots of loot and it is open so you can shoot enemies and that's why I think haunted hills is the best place to land in fortnite.    

Paragraph Writing

Walt. Use paragraphs to link similar ideas together
write in structured, well developed paragraphs that flow well from one to the next within the text
use linking words and phrases to link paragraphs for effect
I learnt to write a descriptive paragraph and paint a picture in peoples heads





I woke up fast the same nightmare seeing the flames, I can’t see it hurts my head to think of it, the night my life failed and everything went wrong, but my mind won’t let me forget. I sat there in silence, my body aching I can’t stand to be like this anymore. I just want the pain to end, but I’m trapped, trapped by the thoughts in my head and trapped in this cabin a prisoner in mind, body and spirit.

 In this old wooden cabin where I’m stuck what am I going to do now I can’t stay here hiding I need to move on from this, I need a plan a plan to help me escape, if I can free myself from this prison I can do anything I put my mind too. I can’t bare to see their faces in my mind as the flames overtook them I thought it was a nightmare I can’t believe their gone my dear John and Lucy and it was all my fault. If I can just get out of here then I can make things right.